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Subject: Looks who's Back! 4/30/2012, 9:23 pm
King: Ladies and Gentleman Welcome to Monday Night Raw Live here in the Windy City of Chicago Illinois
JR: King what a night we have for you, we have a New superstar here tonight
Cole: I wonder who this superstar can be
(Clock Apprears on the Screne)
Roberts: Making His Way to the Ring for Death Valley, The UNNDDEERRTTAAKKEERR
King: Oh My God Can it be?
Cole: Yes it's the Undertaker
JR: Last time we seen the Undertaker was after Wrestlmania after he Beat Vampiro for The United States Champion
King: And the Next night he left wCw for XBWS, I'm glad to see that he's back
Cole: But what does he want?
[ Undertaker Stands in the Middle of the ring, As the Crowd goes wild to See The Return of The Undertaker]
(Undertaker Grabs the Mic and Begins to speak)
Undertaker: The last time i was here was at Wresltmania when i defeated Vampiro to Become the New United States Champion, But i then left thinking that it would be better on the darker side with XBWS, But i was wrong my destiny was right here with wCw. You see right we i stand is what i like to call " The Devils Playground" I came back to wCw for one reason, and one reason only, The United States Champion, i want what is mine and i will get what i want even if that means i have to take out the entire wCw Roster. For those that don't know me, REST IN PEACE!!
King: Wow Cole, What a powerful statement from the Undertaker
Cole: I wonder what can be going through the Superstars Minds?
JR: What a Dark day in Hell for on WcW, Well be right back after this commercial break
OPEN FOR ANYONE TO RESPOND!!
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Subject: Re: Looks who's Back! 5/2/2012, 5:27 pm
[Excellent return promo Undertaker +3SP. You could have easily had a 4 if you had a little more talking from Undertaker you would have easily gotten a 4SP promo. Excellent use of photos. I encourage everyone to follow this example. Great job! Glad to have you back!]