Another Message

The Televisions across the nation are playing there usual programs when they turn to static....



After the static clears the TVs show a barren landscape with 1 or 2 cacti in it. The camera comes to a sign that says Welcome to Truth or Consequences New Mexico and under the sign is a board and on that board is a half ripped paper that has only the words Wanted Dead or Alive...

The wind then blows the paper away and into the town. Once in town the camera shows a shadowy figure inside a saloon. the camera goes into the saloon and in the shadows is the figure face hidden by the shadow that surrounds him...

he starts to talk but his voice is muffled like there is something over his mouth....

???: 11/19/12..... the day I return.... the day THEY return...... the mark of a new era....... the day I..... am..... reborn.....

the figure then holds up a gun and fires it, twice, at the camera causing another static view on the nations TVs...



and in the midst of the static come the words "Bang! Bang!"

........ You stole my promo.

You kinda did Jo.

omg i can never win.... if i do something i stole it if i do something else it sucks well fuck you both..... why is it that i can never do anything that makes you happy for me.....

1 more thing you both can suck my dick and tyler i didnt "steal" your promo, your promo inspired me to do this one so shut your fucking mouth

easy....stop it now, i will issue some reprimands

Hug it out.

^Kane's hand

The only thing that is really similar is the date thing and that is such a common trope that you really can't claim that. I know I am not an admin but I think that this probably could have been handled in PM or on Xbox, brothers.

excellent work Bryan!

ok i'm sorry for blowing a gasket i was just pissed off that Tyler had to shoot some false claim that i stole his promo.... and then Mag had to agree...... but hey i can delete this one too if that helps....

Mr. Socko wrote:

ok i'm sorry for blowing a gasket i was just pissed off that Tyler had to shoot some false claim that i stole his promo.... and then Mag had to agree...... but hey i can delete this one too if that helps....

Jo..... It wasn't a false claim.... I inspired you..... You're promo is very similar to mine..... I don't care man.... I didn't post "Fucking faggot stole my promo!" I simply said you stole it.... It wasn't a big deal.... Just keep your promo and I will stop posting on anything.... It will stop me from getting cussed out...

tyler. I am proud of you.

Jay has asked me to catch us up on the grading of RAW promos. With that out of the way here are my thoughts:

I really like the basic concept of this promo. Solid formatting also help it a lot. That said it wasn't really substantive so I am afraid it won't break into the echelons of "amazing promos"

Still, solid is better than shitty.

*****Final Grade: 3/5*****