Hi, I'm DarkWolf. You of course know me now as the Smackdown promo grader. Welcome to Smackdown!
Now, me being a hater of wrestling today.... I have not seen an AJ promo is ages..... So, I watched YouTube videos! Even without them, I rather enjoyed the promo as a whole However, I do need to throw out my criticism due to that being my job.
I am what most would call as a "Grammar Nazi" due to my huge frustration at small little mishaps during typing or writing. Now, let's get to my grade that being said.
Grade: 3.
I am not aware of his current situation but I did note that you said he has only been in TNA. If I am not mistaken, he has been in WWE. Maybe not for long but hey, just a side note.
You had several grammar flaws. There were puncuation errors, capitilization errors and other things. Nobody is perfect but a proofread helps. I do it after I post..... Actually had to change a word on here. Oops. Also, you had an announcement.... On the show..... That hypes for the show.... It threw me off which will lead to my question at the end.....
That is what overall dropped your grade plus this being your first promo with AJ, it seemed rather.... Bare. No real substance, just a hype promo. Which, is what everyone can build off of. Besides that, you made a great starting point for AJ. I hope to see big things with him along with big feuds.
Also, can I ask if you plan on participating on Smackdown this week? I am booking and do not want to leave out someone. Thanks you for your time and hope you enjoyed your grade and criticism!