Posts : 405 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2012-04-30 Age : 32 Location : Orlando, Flordia
Subject: United States Championship 12/28/2012, 3:58 am
Cole: Hello Ladies and Gentleman, welcome to another edition of Friday Night Smackdown. I'm Michael Cole alongside with one of WWE Greatest superstars "JBL"
JBL: What a night we have for you, last week a new United States Champion was crowned by the name of RYBACK. It's seems that Daniel Bryan and Sheamus are not to pleased of the results of the match.
JBL: We'll speaking of an Angry Irish man, here come The Great White Sheamus now
Lilian Garcia: Making his way down to the ring, SSHHEEAAMMUUSS!!!!!!
Cole: I wonder what can be going through his head at the moment?
Sheamus: 1st of all, I just want to come out here and say Congratulations to Ryback in becoming the new United States Champion. (Crowd goes wild.)
Sheamus: But the real reason I am out here is because, last week I came out to this very ring, challenging Daniel Bryan to a one on one extreme rules match for the US title, and did i get that match no, no I didn't instead i got a US triple threat match with Ryback as the third person.
[b[i]]Sheamus: Let me tell you something fella, never come between and Angry Irish man and his Gold. I Came in search for Gold, but all Step gave me was dust.. Before you get your panites in a bunch step, I know that nothing around here is free, and that we have to earn our way to the top. So i'm going to say this fella, I will defeat anybody that steps in my way again from becoming the United States Champion.... I want a one on one rematch and i want it now.
Sheamus: Oh wait Step, If you ever Screw me again, I will kick daddy's little princess head right off her bloody shoulders and that's not a threat, It's Luck of the Irsh!!!
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Heath Slater wCw Assistant GM
Posts : 648 Reputation : 24 Join date : 2012-09-05 Age : 32 Location : Phoenix, AZ
Subject: Re: United States Championship 12/31/2012, 9:46 pm
There was a lot of drama surrounding this match so I love that you made a promo about it. You responded exactly the way Sheamus would respond in the WWE. I also like how you have developed your own style. It's easy to tell a Pres promo apart from other people's promos. You use a lot of visuals and make good use of commentary.
There is a little formatting goof in one of your last paragraphs with some exposed html, but that happens to me all the time. It's hard to catch those sometimes.
{Official Grade} 4/5
Although I'm not booking Smackdown, I have a feeling this story line with you and the title is nowhere close to being over. Nice promo man, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
