Down to Buisness

*The Rock walks out backwards from the backstage area*
*The Rock stops at the top of the ramp... then turns around to a huge pop by the crowd*
*The Rock walks down the ramp with a serious look but a cocky walk*



*The Rock slides and rolls into the ring then gets handed a microphone*

The Rock: Do you smell it in the air... Its a... smelly smell... Its smells like the GREAT ONE THE ROCK HAS RETURNED TO HIS PEOPLE!!!

*The crowd throws up their Rocky signs and begin to chant The Rock's name*

The Rock: The Rock has returned because The Rock... The Rock is tired of people running around

*Switches to a high pitched voice*

The Rock: I want to be champion! No me! Im Stephinie Mcmahon so respect meee!

*The crowd bursts into laughter and The Rock busts out a signiture white smile*

The Rock: This is not how wCw... This is not how The Rock's show

*The Rock looks straight at the camera*

The Rock: Friday Night Smackdown

*The Rock continues to participate with the crowd*

The Rock: will be run... As long as The Rock lives, breaths, and ELECTRIFY'S... This show will never

*The crowd participates*

The Rock: AND THE ROCK MEANS NNNNEEEEEVVVVVEEEERRRR!!!

The Rock: become some punk ass show where little jabroni's run around begging for title shots because they have money!... The Rock won his titles the hard way... Whooping every Roody Poo Candy Ass in sight!!!

*The crowd begins cheering and chanting "Boots to Asses"*

The Rock: Mainly The Rock has seen this in two people... Hell, The Rock sees this in the two people going for the WWE Championship... Mr.TickleMyPickle Ziggles and the *The Rock air signs* "man" who has his wife carry his little baby jabroni balls in her million dollar purse that she got from daddy...

*The crowd goes ballistic and in shock about the offensive words spoken about Stephinie McMahon, Triple H, and Dolph Ziggler*
*The Rock paces quicker around the ring while getting more energy then continuing*

The Rock: Dolph Ziggler EPITOMIZES the art of ********(The Rocks mouth motions bitching), moaning, and beating jobbers until he "deserved" that championship match... Good for him that he won though... Now The Rock can show him what its like to face a REAL MAN... His Candy Ass will feel the turned and shined up power... of The Rock's size 13 BOOT... Dolph Ziggler will finnaly know what its like to face a man who accually has a large strodle not contained in a purse

*The Rocks energy slows down as he stars straight into the camera and raises his people's eyebrow*



The Rock: If you smell what The Rock is cooking Ladies



*The Rock gives the camera a wink as he leaves the arena with his people going nuts for their people's champion*

*I would love for people to give me some feedback on this promo... Especially Admin opinions*

I will comment on this when I feel motivated to write. Give me a little time.

This still needs to be graded

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official grade
0 sp

because you are suspended.


Jay

I posted this a long time ago... way b4 suspension

I love you, Danny.

Critic may grade it if he so chooses , but I will not be forcing him.


Jay

Woah sorry ownz, some of these promos got marked as read before I even read them so I had no idea they were there. Sorry man.

Well I thought this was a great improvement over the last promo. You took my criticism well and I must say it made for an entertaining result. With this tournament, I think people are forgetting about how well Rocky actually has been doing. With this promo, he decides to take matters into his own hands and calls out both the GM and the new Champ.

The promo was funny and entertaining to read with a different formatting than we are used to seeing with your promos.

{Official Grade}
5/5

Hate to disagree with Jay's ruling here, but he did write this promo before he was suspended and it's solely my fault that it's being graded now. You can choose to uphold the ruling if you want to Jay, but if so, then I'm sorry ownzu, this is my fault.

I thought the promo was great and it a nice change of pace from the promos that we are used to seeing around here. Hopefully you will continue to win and get a shot at the champ sooner than later. I would love to see the promo battles between you and Arch.

Critic's grade stands.


Jay

Hey Ownz , See ya soon.