Posts : 133 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2012-05-02 Age : 32 Location : Kansas
Subject: a forwarning 12/14/2012, 4:31 am
right after the message from The beloved smackdown gm the lights in the arena cut out as the tron lights up and a voice starts to ring from the speakers.
"when a spirit feels wronged"
"no one is safe"
"when you hear the warning"
"there will be no mercy"
a little girl starts to laugh
the little girl gigles as she sings "there will be no mercy"
with the gong the screen starts to shake as it comes in to a very dark room with a figure with his back to the screen.
"i told you last week that there would be hell to pay. Tonight starts the raign of terror that i will be unleashing on the Smackdown roster. However plans have changed. Because tonight i won't be doing it alone. Tonight my little brother helps bringing the day of reconing apon the Roster of Smackdown
Antonio Cesaro
Drew McIntyre
Tonight you will rest in peace!
at that moment The Deadman spins around and does the throat cut while his eye's roll back
with the final gong the arena returns to normal as the show goes on
Heath Slater wCw Assistant GM
Posts : 648 Reputation : 24 Join date : 2012-09-05 Age : 32 Location : Phoenix, AZ
Subject: Re: a forwarning 12/19/2012, 12:38 pm
This was an improvement over your last promo.
It had an eerie feeling to it, and you really captured what makes 'Taker promos so cool.
The grammar was still pretty rough, maybe your typing these on something other than a computer, I'm not sure. The graphics and videos were really what made this promo much better as they helped build the atmosphere.
{Official Grade} 3/5
You'll find a lot better promos out there, but this was still much better than your last one. Now you just need to get your matches done. Hopefully you can win some title gold before you have to leave here!
